Tuesday, 24 August 2021

Animal Town

My visit to Animal Town 


I always wanted to go to Animal Town. For whatever reason we didn't go. Until now. Mum said we were going! I asked why now? Mum said we got some tickets on discount. I assumed they were really expensive? Well anyway we hired a van with cool windows especially for a safari and off we went.

On the way the van broke down. Mum rang AA but got no service where we were. It was like the desert and we were stranded ! Then suddenly we see a long neck coming closer. It was a giraffe! Are we near Animal Town after all? Yes we were it seemed. There was a monkey following behind the giraffe and even a bear! Mum nearly fainted with fright. We jumped in the van and watched the parade of animals go past. Some big, some small, some with long necks, big heads, some with wings and claws. 

It was an amazing adventure! 

We ate our lunch in the van and watched all the animals continue their journey past our spot without a care in the world.


3 comments:

  1. Hi Mayah
    Thanks for posting on your blog. Unfortunately I am unable to open the link! Are you able to try and post it again?
    Sarah

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  2. Redone Sarah :)

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  3. Hi Mayah
    Thanks for reposting your story, I'm so glad I got to read it. Next time you could use speech marks in you story when someone is talking. I really like how you described what the animals looked like. What is you favourite animal?
    Sarah

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