WALT: Make a story with a person.
So here is mine
Holly- he was so sad
Paityn- then he put a plaster on his foot then went to get his drink of water
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WALT: Make a story with a person.
So here is mine
paityn- | One day there was a talking green donkey. |
Mayah- | And it liked carrots. |
Holly- | So he ate one and a little yellow pig came out of the carrot |
paityn- | So one day he was going for a walk and a flying chicken hit him in the head. |
Mayah- | Then he passed out for 1 sec. |
Holly- | So when he sat up he was running around like crazy. |
paityn- | then he ran to go to the doctor |
Mayah- | Then he eats some doritos. |
Holly- | And went home to his bed and had a good time watching tv |
paityn- | He stayed up all night eating lollies and watching TV |
Mayah- | And he wanted water so he got out of bed and he hit his foot so hard he cried |
Holly- he was so sad
Paityn- then he put a plaster on his foot then went to get his drink of water
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