Friday, 25 October 2019

Best Day Ever

WALT We are learning to write a recount.  I am learning to re read to check it makes sense. i was well 
because it makes sense 
Next step  Is to do my best work on writing.
Best Day Ever!
I saw  a fast dog
I saw  white bunny 
I heard rivers whispering to me 
I felt calm 
I felt happy


I wonder if I could  be a bunny?



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