The Mirror

we are learning to write a narrative a narrative is a kind of story, in storeys you add problem solving i enjoyed writing this because it was so fun. i found hard writing this all. How can I do better?

The Mirror

There  was a creepy mirror it had a  lady Ocea and I were so scared we were thirsty 

and got a drink the water was so nice, I felt  so sad and worried

We went into  the bathroom to check it out   i didn't want to be here as we walked around the bathroom  Ocea says i am so hungry i say there ́s no food only water no food we we check everywhere we see a kids room wait there had kids?. I say Oceas like omg i really didn't know?there's a kids room i say there's a kids room

Let's start checking around okay Ocea said  i checked there only i saw a kid room 

and  an adults room we saw a  bathroom and a kitchen and a dining room.

So we  checked downstairs too just i think  we checked the whole house wait i hear something I said same Ocea said is that a to be continued! What will happen next!!!!Its a dog it looks like it got left behind  poor dog lets put its lead on lets keep it its a girl too its friendly should we keep her i says sure Oceas said i said okay the dog heard something so lets go to the kitchen and make some pizza.