we are learning to write a narrative a narrative is a kind of story, in storeys you add problem solving i enjoyed writing this because it was so fun. i found hard writing this all. How can I do better?
The Mirror
There was a creepy mirror it had a lady Ocea and I were so scared we were thirsty
and got a drink the water was so nice, I felt so sad and worried
We went into the bathroom to check it out i didn't want to be here as we walked around the bathroom Ocea says i am so hungry i say there ́s no food only water no food we we check everywhere we see a kids room wait there had kids?. I say Oceas like omg i really didn't know?there's a kids room i say there's a kids room
Let's start checking around okay Ocea said i checked there only i saw a kid room
and an adults room we saw a bathroom and a kitchen and a dining room.
So we checked downstairs too just i think we checked the whole house wait i hear something I said same Ocea said is that a to be continued! What will happen next!!!!Its a dog it looks like it got left behind poor dog lets put its lead on lets keep it its a girl too its friendly should we keep her i says sure Oceas said i said okay the dog heard something so lets go to the kitchen and make some pizza.
